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a single poem
I'll never stop revising -
myself





October '11
I hope


edit:  Thank You everyone for the DD!
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Given 2012-02-02
Inner-scope by ~bottle-in-the-sea Suggester Writes: one of the best short pieces of literature I have ever seen, exemplifying any writers connection to the city and nature. ( Suggested by Nichrysalis and Featured by Beccalicious )
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grayrobe Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Student Writer
Grats on the DD! Long overdue :worship:
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! and how are you? :)
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grayrobe Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Writer
well I must be fine, my heart's still beating :P
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spacingOUTasWEspeak Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012   Traditional Artist
I really love this. Would you mind if I quoted it on my facebook? I would put your name and a link to your profile here on deviantart with it. :)
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! sure no prob as long as you credit like you said :)
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spacingOUTasWEspeak Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012   Traditional Artist
Your welcome! and of course! :)
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Laws-Jazzhands Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
We are all like poems and other forms of art, we have titles, and are judged differently by everyone, by said titles, our contents, our looks uniformity, style origin(in more ways than two), and how much potential we have to reach others and make them feel, think and react to us upon first sight and through reflection.

I know just what to say to describe this poem if I haven't already but I'll keep it to myself, because to me art is is letting others develop opinions and share them at will.
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you. this is the beauty in art, the different angles from which one can view a piece. from my angle though, the poem isn't about our image towards others, but about inner values and remaining humble(if one view it as the words of a poet). but like I said, that's the beauty, angles!
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Laws-Jazzhands Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
:thanks:
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ProtoRepublic Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
I agree.

For instance: To me this poem is about a crack addicted ex-KGB agent expatriated to the U.S. Did I mention he is also a bear? That's kind of important.
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