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a single poem
I'll never stop revising -
myself





October '11
I hope


edit:  Thank You everyone for the DD!
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Given 2012-02-02
Inner-scope by ~bottle-in-the-sea Suggester Writes: one of the best short pieces of literature I have ever seen, exemplifying any writers connection to the city and nature. ( Suggested by Nichrysalis and Featured by Beccalicious )
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grayrobe Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Student Writer
Grats on the DD! Long overdue :worship:
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! and how are you? :)
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grayrobe Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Writer
well I must be fine, my heart's still beating :P
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spacingOUTasWEspeak Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012   Traditional Artist
I really love this. Would you mind if I quoted it on my facebook? I would put your name and a link to your profile here on deviantart with it. :)
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! sure no prob as long as you credit like you said :)
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spacingOUTasWEspeak Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012   Traditional Artist
Your welcome! and of course! :)
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Laws-Jazzhands Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
We are all like poems and other forms of art, we have titles, and are judged differently by everyone, by said titles, our contents, our looks uniformity, style origin(in more ways than two), and how much potential we have to reach others and make them feel, think and react to us upon first sight and through reflection.

I know just what to say to describe this poem if I haven't already but I'll keep it to myself, because to me art is is letting others develop opinions and share them at will.
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you. this is the beauty in art, the different angles from which one can view a piece. from my angle though, the poem isn't about our image towards others, but about inner values and remaining humble(if one view it as the words of a poet). but like I said, that's the beauty, angles!
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Laws-Jazzhands Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
:thanks:
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ProtoRepublic Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
I agree.

For instance: To me this poem is about a crack addicted ex-KGB agent expatriated to the U.S. Did I mention he is also a bear? That's kind of important.
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Laws-Jazzhands Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
XD

What about the man in the rainbow hockey mask, and the girl on the football team?
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hisalone17 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
Really like this and will take it to heart.
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you:)
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ProtoRepublic Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
I don't get this poem.


You mean Bruce Willis was really dead the ENTIRE time?
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Amberlouie Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Professional Writer
Hey, congratulations on the DD. Though I'm more than a little confused about the description which *Packeranatic has given. If the 'connection to city and nature' hangs only on the title, then that's not enough. There's only writer's connection here, neither city or nature. Someone explain! Thoroughly confused.
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! I was quite confused myself, but I see Packeranatic has explained it well :) here's the piece the desciption was meant for [link]
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Amberlouie Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Hahaha, ooops! I like the intended DD piece much better. What a comedic mishap! x
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Nichrysalis Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I suggested a slightly different short poem of *bottle-in-the-sea's, called Nature is my Muse, but it seems that the ^CV Beccalicious took a look around their gallery and found this little gem, which I had overlooked in all honesty.
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Amberlouie Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Oh man, sounds like ^Beccalicious DD'd the wrong piece, which is probably easy enough to do/happen. I definitely prefer 'Nature is my Muse' to this, plus more context with the description. Good find! x
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pixieplay Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
I adore this. :heart:
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much:heart:
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moonlight117 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
it took me a minute. then i got it. great poem, it's true for everyone in their own sort of way, they may not view themselves as a poem, but maybe a story, a painting, a sculpture...ok I'll stop ranting, what I mean to say is it's brilliant and congrats on the DD!!!!
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much! :)))
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runty Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Student General Artist
Aw. So short, but so meaningful!
Laconically beautiful ouo
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! :rose:
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EvranaWolfsong Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is very well worded. And so true *hopefully* for all of us.
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for your kind words :rose:
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EvranaWolfsong Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are very welcome. :{)
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mailn6 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Student General Artist
:clap:

Fantastic.
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! :iconbowplz:
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mailn6 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student General Artist
:aww:

Any time, beautiful work!
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xxtoongirlfanxx Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Student Writer
:iconcongratsdd1plz::iconcongratsdd2plz::iconcongratsdd3plz: This is one of the best short pieces I have ever read. It deserves this!
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much:heart:
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Razgriz-3 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
A friend's brother did this, or is doing this, or was doing this, or... well, not exactly the same.
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velocity07 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
Wow, that is inspiring. I love it. :heart:
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you think so! thanks:heart:
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velocity07 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
:hug:
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love it! :) Well done!
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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Beccalicious Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012   Writer
I really love how so many of us can relate to such few words. A wonderful Senryu!
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconbowplz:
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Phantosanucca Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
Well, that was ALMOST a haiku. <_<
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'd like to hear your thoughts about it
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
brilliant!
congratulations on the dd <3
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! :rose:
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LeadHeart787 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This hit a chord in me. Great play with words :)
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad to hear so :) thank you
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archelyxs Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
Amazing. :heart:
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bottle-in-the-sea Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :heart:
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Kirtan-3d Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:iconcongratsdd1plz::iconcongratsdd2plz::iconcongratsdd3plz:
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