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Desolate

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withered leaves
scattered on the porch --
wind now reigns this place





September '11
the second piece created on the same theme, a deserted house.
this one focuses on the feelings evoked being on the outside of the house, while the first one on the feelings being in the inside

first one here: 'They're All Gone' [link]
© 2011 - 2024 bottle-in-the-sea
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somnomollior's avatar
I love your word choices here. Scattered suggests the idea of the previous occupants being scattered far and wide. The word reigns sounds like the word rains which adds to the sense of desolation.